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Old 29-06-11, 12:05 AM
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Old 29-06-11, 01:36 PM
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Pete loving your poems hun, full of meaning and very deep. Looking forward to reading more. lol x
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Old 29-06-11, 05:20 PM
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im not... but im still gonna read them!

bloody poems

"And your hairs standAnd your breath quickensListening... to that rhythm... that slow.. Calm ... pounding beat.."

breath quickening seems the opposite of calm to me.
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