Please read and comment (:

Emotion:

you make me,
smile all day.
the things you do,
the things you say.
no matter what,
its about you.
no matter why,
you get me through.
i cant be,
the one who's hurt.
i just want you,
yeah we'll flirt.
but once im there,
i cant let go.
i just think that,
you should know.
i think your fun,
your just so good,
you make me feel,
the way i should.
i know you want,
to stay friends.
but ill like you,
till the end.
and where we start,
when we're gone.
ill still like you,
on my own.
if you dont want me,
i wont stop.
im not that girl,
to give up.
you may be used-
to all this crap,
i aint the same,
im not like that.
i really feel, you-
dont understand.
ill be the 1st,
to hold your hand.
if you cry,
and your tears fall.
ill be the 1st,
to catch them all.
you still dont know,
i give my soul.
like the devil takes lives,
i give my all.
i give my heart,
i just want you.
to hold me close,
and when you do...
i'll keep you safe,
together always.
i'll be with you,
forever nowadays.
but you still hurt me,
you still dont see...
i want you so happy,
to be with me <3

[tommysize1]

yeah i liked that more than most poems ive read.
i think that brings my total number of poems read up to about 20.

there were a couple of bits where i lost the rhythm tho.
"if you dont want me,"
and
"like the devil takes lives"

ok bye!

awhh thankss xx