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Old 10-08-11, 12:22 PM
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Looking all around me, it's a shocking sight I see
A war torn place of trouble, a world of anarchy
Hurt and pain and sadness, cuts you to the core
Fighting and destruction, that seeps from every pore
Battles raging everywhere, the consequences grave
Seeking the attention, which some just seem to crave
Shouting swearing violence, mind numbing to the end
Dignity in tatters, making enemies of friends
Arguments and fighting, breaking out at will
Scars will never heal the wounds, of the blood we spill
Communities are shattered, their world has fallen in
It's such a bitter struggle, in a war no one can win
Endless times of sickness, as the virus starts to spread
Lies deceit and suspicious minds, unravel like a thread
Anguish tears and sorrow, are seen beneath the waste
And in the end we find that sweetness, leaves a bitter taste
Lives are crumbled needlessly, like buildings turned to dust
Somewhere amongst the ashes, we find we lose the trust
Now what I've just described to you, aren't riots where you're at
I've just described another night, of being in woc chat

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Old 10-08-11, 02:25 PM
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damn sketch ... very well written poem. love the saucy twist at the end.. keep writing.. im seeing you in an all new ***ty light lol!

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Old 10-08-11, 02:34 PM
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could relate to everything you wrote sketch, but got me in the end with woc chat. lol Brilliantly put together xxx
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Old 11-08-11, 07:39 AM
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burn the banks!
im not looting
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Old 11-08-11, 08:54 AM
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OMG ur a Poet ... nice to see you useing forum
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Old 12-08-11, 01:37 PM
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spot on mate, love the ending lol
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I'm very impressed Sketch, pet
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