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Old 01-10-11, 06:15 AM
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sounded like a click of a camera
wen a pulled that trigga
an slammed that hammer
a didnt pause a didnt stammer
only time a blinked
split second ended in a voilent crack
only time a shirked
wen a felt the blow back

split second that last forever
lernin the hard way
a cant go back not now not ever
a crime so heinous
it aint cool to be armed an dangerous
split second how many lives wasted
split second the world wos annhilalated

a done me time
law sez a paid for me crime
split second everyday
a see the life a taken away
split second everyday
in me head a widowed wife that day
split second everyday a dream
IM SO SORRY AM SORRY a scream

split second of madness
an eternity of sadness
for those who remain of a life a taken
for those a would refrain for a life of **** am makin
split second everday a wish a could go back

a dont care if ya hate me
a dont care if ya forgive me
am dead to me self
every single second
of every single day
the cruelist punishment of the cruelist judge
ill not never forgive myself

lessons from a street wise teacher
now turned to a pitiful creature
dont let the same error of me ways
becom the ruin of your days
cos is to late to turn back
wen pickin up that cap filled gat
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Old 03-10-11, 05:32 PM
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ur so gangsta! brap brap and such.

i couldn't find a sready rhythm
have you tried putting it to music?
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Old 03-10-11, 06:04 PM
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a got some mates who keep 'saying' they will put some of me better ones to music

unfortunatley asking stoners to do anything is like talking to a brick wall Pffft lol
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