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Old 03-10-11, 06:55 AM
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unPC label to afraid to speak
makes the population weak

unhappy whisperin voices
lifes stolen choices

middle aged men just moan on bar stools
havent the energy to blow a fuse

down trodden an subjugated
livin life prostrated

tolpuddle martyrs the rage against the machine
a lost forgotten dream

stand an fight for your right
crushed in historys last miners strike

we got heroes on dole queues
TV shows about eatin from waste refuse

worship D list celeb fools
spend more on cruise than inner city schools

parasites makin careers from welfare
nurses givin up cant afford the child care

blame culture killed fun entertainment
even a childs swing needs a risk assessment

fondly once nicknamed Blighty
look how far the fall of the once mighty
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Old 03-10-11, 05:44 PM
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that was bloody brilliant
no joke. i loved it.

plus i learnt a new word! prostrated

id change "we got heroes on dole queues" to soldiers or war heroes because just "heroes" confused me and i didnt know who you meant untill i read through it again.

my favourite bit is the risk assessment for swings
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Old 03-10-11, 06:01 PM
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thnx tommy a just thought tho nowadays we kind all know wots meant by heroes but then also it goes a bit deeper to cos arnt firemen an nurses heroes too in their own way and their jobs is under threat too
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Old 03-10-11, 06:09 PM
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true.

but on the whole i think public sector moan too much.
they think they have it bad?!

make a line about tax evasion by rich brits.
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Old 03-10-11, 06:17 PM
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kinda sota already did a wile ago a called it whoremonger not sure why seemed to fit at the time but cant find it at the mo
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