No but Yes....a poem by me

The time excavates ditch at my heart or you
But I forgot that I gather feelings
I am grim boy changed to fierce by Deo
So don't think i'm still like those fiddlings

Your eyes were always full of love
Peering at you,and telling myself you're the moon.
Yet at any rate i will solve
You're a lifeless rainbow in poor spring too soon

Darling,could I come back with no cord
Or I'm just in your cage as a bird?
If so, you'r a dagger in my core

Life is taugh with love you doff
You're spring beauty, so don't scoff
Every time I remember I love I soar

[tommysize1]

what the **** are you on about!?

[JoobleJoobles]

You got your 'your' and 'you're' mixed up.

And what is a 'doff'??

What/who is 'Deo'??

:S

[xx SweetPea xx]

Erm. Uhhh. What??

[Midnight10101]

pass lol.......

[roobaby]

Doff is like taking something off, like.... you doff your cap. So I guess he is saying that 'she' gives little attention to love - she throws it away. As for the rest of it, I think I got the intention ( I rellay like you but you don't seem to care) but then poetry was never my strong point, apart from that written by Spike Milligan, lol